Tuesday 29 October 2013

The Crash




On a scorching day in oz there was a guy named john and he LOVED his girlfriend named Lilly they also LOVED exploring the world they have been everywhere including the poorest countries they were there to help. Lilly was a wonderful woman she would get stressed if she did not get out that much. She always went on walks every single morning and never stopped actually no one could stop her. Lilly had a boyfriend named John the only person he would explore with was Lilly they loved taking risks like jumping of the highest building, jumping out of a airplane and jumping off a cliff which was fun for them. but not for others.  



One day they decided to go on one more trip to Raro so they packed their bags and headed off to the airport. When they got there it was packed and the only plane that was open to Raro was G947 which was dangerous but they didn’t care so they took a risk which was what they were about. They got on and looked at the furniture the said, "Wow look at this raggy ugly plane this is the worst!" The waiters which were robots welcomed them and the two of them said, "Why are you so rusty" the robot's then shut down. They were the only ones on the plane. They had a nice feast from the robot's waiter which recharged and lay down to have a rest until…



They felt the plane rumble they thought it was just some stuff in the back or the ugly plane until something hit there head they woke up disturbed but when they looked up there was a mask right on top of their head. They put them on and went to have a look on what was going on and when they went in the polite room and the auto pilot went crazy. They both went to scream like little girls but before they could it crashed and luckily they survived. The first thing they thought of was how they would survive until people rescue them. So they built a shelter and made some food from bananas and coconuts because it was in a jungle. 6 years later…



They were found by a couple of scientists who were finding DNA samples of bugs. They called their jet and took the couple on to the plane that was were john pulled out the ring and on the plane and said, “I want to spend the rest of my life with you and here I go will you marry me” Lily screamed, “YES YES YES of course” and they lived happily ever after.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Khaia I agree for you mark you can do better

    From Korobeau

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  2. Hi khaia its me Faafetai
    I like how you wrote your story about the crash it has heaps of details and I like your title it so cool for the plane. Good on you!

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